Sorry, I know I'm late posting this, I got distracted by a book. In fact I only finished writing this an hour ago and gave it a quick edit over the last 15 minutes. It's been an intense evening and I have cramp in my arm but it's done!
Right so the point of posting this here is to hopefully get some feedback on it. I know my friend and mentor Renee will be brutal with it. That is want I want and what I need. I can't improve my writing skills unless people are honest, so constructive criticism please.
Also, random query, do we think anything mentioned in this warrants restricting the age access to my blog? Because I honestly don't know. This is as explicit as I will get on this blog, everything else is being saved for the novel!
Just to point out I've spent about 10 minutes now trying to make the text I've imported the same as everything else, but the last bit just will not change from a central alignment. I apologise.
And now for the fun bit! These things always made me laugh on fanfics and I've always wanted to write one myself and this is my first opportunity!
DISCLAIMER: This short story is a work of fiction, any resemblance to companies, or persons living or dead is purely coincidental.
This short story also features a loving relationship between two women, as well as some inexplicit sexual references. If such things are not to your taste I recommend you leave this page. In fact you might not want to come back to it, as this sort of thing creeps up regularly in my work :-)